Comments on: Push The Button (Page 06)

By: alecho

alecho — Sat, 13 Aug 2011 01:25:36 +0000

recycled water? hahaha… cool but gross

By: Spencey

Spencey — Wed, 26 May 2010 21:36:16 +0000

Well said that man! Actually I suppose it could be the ‘camera’ that moved rather than the girls. Yes, let’s say that’s what happened!

By: Roland

Roland — Wed, 26 May 2010 13:00:07 +0000

true about it looking odd on the last panel. For the most part, in comics, you try having the person who is speaking first on the left side of the panel. Sometimes it is hard to gradually “turn the camera” around in the given panels.

By: Spencey

Spencey — Wed, 26 May 2010 11:23:18 +0000

Thanks for the comment Inky. My first comic Dr Sheep and the Aardvark got the balance between story and characters all wrong. I had planned on making the story run over two years, but a year into it another project took over and I ended up cramming the last year into six months. As a result the first half was quite slow and then it hurtled along at breakneck pace towards the end. My plan with Girls in Space is to blanace things out as much as possible, and my hope is that the individual stories will help things move along, but force me not to cram too many big plot points into any single story.

You’re right about that last panel, now that I look at it. To be honest I hadn’t spotted that. Wish I’d flipped panels two and three now. I’ll look out for that in future.

By: Inky

Inky — Wed, 26 May 2010 07:26:58 +0000

I know that feeling, and I also know how it backfires to skip important facts to make a faster paced comic. Don’t rush it.

I like your comic and art quite a bit. But I think it is odd that the girls swap places in the last panel.