The Prototype (Page 33)

When I originally wrote the script for this page, I had a group of youths (‘neds’ as we call then in Scotland) saying these lines.  However, it occurred to me it would wrap up this first story better if I brought back Dougal and his wife from Page 6 instead.  I might bring them back again in future, as I’m starting to like their cantankerous relationship.

Friday brings the final page of The Prototype, but fear not, the next story follows on without interruption (starting with story 2′s Cover page on Monday).


Discussion (11) ¬

  1. G.Dupons

    A flying VW Bus! Tell me, did you played Zak McKracken?

    • Spencey

      No, but I’ve just googled it. Haha, maybe there’s something Volkswagen aren’t telling us about their vehicles!

      • G.Dupons

        It comes even better! The crew of the space shuttle VW Bus in the game were two girls!

        • Spencey

          By the way, I’m renaming my strip Jack MacRakkin. Ahem. ;)

  2. G.Dupons

    Oh and I like the mans comment!

  3. Roland

    “I Hate you” ha ha ha, i think you made the right choice with them instead of the youths. just funnier that way

    • Spencey

      Thanks! Maybe one day I’ll give those pensioners their own spin-off comic, based on The Odd Couple… The Old Couple. :/

  4. jynksie

    By that age, “hate” is just another loving term for “still tolerating you”! o.O

    • Spencey

      Haha. You’re definitely a glass half full person! :)

  5. alecho

    Hahahahahahahaha, I like the simplicity of the final panel! Hit! :)

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